How to write Google Ads that get clicked
Most Google Ads copy is generic garbage. 'Quality Service, Free Quote, Call Today' — that's not an ad, that's a template everyone uses. Here's how to write ads that actually stand out.
Your ad copy is probably terrible (and that's good news)
Look at the ads for any competitive keyword. 80% of them say the same thing: "Professional Service, Free Estimates, Call Now." They're interchangeable. If you swapped the brand names, nobody would notice. This is your opportunity — because when everyone's ads look identical, even slightly better copy gives you a massive edge.
Ad copy does two jobs. First, it gets the click — that's your CTR. Second, it filters traffic — good copy attracts buyers, bad copy attracts browsers. A headline that says "Starting at $199/mo" gets fewer clicks than "Free Trial" but the clicks it gets are from people who can actually pay. Your Quality Score improves too, because Google rewards ads that match searcher intent.
Bad copy vs. good copy: real examples
Example 1: Plumber
Bad
"Professional Plumbing Services | Licensed & Insured | Call Today"
Good
"Burst Pipe? We're There in 45 Min | $0 Diagnostic Fee | 4.9 Stars, 2,100+ Jobs"
The bad version could be any plumber anywhere. The good version answers the searcher's real question: how fast can you get here, what will it cost, and can I trust you?
Example 2: SaaS product
Bad
"Best Project Management Software | Try For Free | Trusted by Thousands"
Good
"Replace 4 Tools With 1 | Teams Ship 30% Faster | Free for Up to 10 Users"
"Best" and "Trusted by Thousands" are claims without evidence. "Replace 4 Tools" and "30% Faster" are specific outcomes the buyer cares about.
Example 3: E-commerce
Bad
"Shop Our Collection | High Quality Products | Fast Shipping"
Good
"Japanese Steel Chef Knives | $89, Ships Free Tomorrow | 60-Day Return, No Questions"
Specificity wins. "Japanese Steel" beats "High Quality." A real price beats "Shop Our Collection." "Ships Free Tomorrow" beats "Fast Shipping."
How to write responsive search ads that work
Google gives you 15 headline slots (30 characters each) and 4 description slots (90 characters each). Google then mixes and matches, showing 2-3 headlines and 1-2 descriptions per impression. Here's the thing most people miss: sometimes Google only shows 2 headlines. So at least 5 of your 15 headlines need to work as standalone statements.
Write headlines in these categories to force yourself into variety:
- Keyword match (3-4 headlines): Include the search term. "Emergency Plumber Near You" for a plumber campaign.
- Value prop (3-4 headlines): Your biggest differentiators. "45-Minute Response Time" or "No Diagnostic Fee."
- Social proof (2-3 headlines): Reviews, awards, numbers. "4.9 Stars on Google" or "2,100+ Jobs Completed."
- CTA (2-3 headlines): What to do next. "Book Online in 60 Seconds" or "Get Your Free Quote."
- Brand (1-2 headlines): Your company name, ideally with a qualifier. "Acme Plumbing — Since 2003."
Pinning strategy: what to lock down
The conventional wisdom says "never pin headlines." We disagree. Strategic pinning gives you brand consistency without killing Google's ability to optimize.
Our recommendation: Pin your brand name to H1. Pin your strongest value prop to H2. Leave H3 and all descriptions unpinned. This ensures your brand always shows and your core message always appears, while giving Google freedom to test everything else.
If you pin the same headline to a position, Google has no choice — it must show it. If you pin 2-3 different headlines to the same position, Google rotates among them but always fills that slot from your pinned set. Use the second approach for H2 if you have multiple strong value props to test.
What to test first (priority order)
Not all elements are equal. Headlines matter roughly 5x more than descriptions. They're bigger, bolder, and what the eye hits first. Test headlines before touching descriptions.
- Headline value propositions. Test different angles: price vs. speed vs. quality vs. social proof. This is your biggest lever.
- Headline CTAs. "Get a Free Quote" vs. "Book Online Now" vs. "See Pricing." The CTA frames the entire click.
- Descriptions. Once you've locked in winning headline themes, test descriptions that support them.
- Display paths. Often overlooked. "/free- quote" outperforms "/services" in most lead gen accounts.
CTR benchmarks: know what "good" looks like
| Industry | Average CTR (search) | Good CTR target |
|---|---|---|
| Legal | 2.4% | 4%+ |
| Home services | 4.8% | 6%+ |
| E-commerce | 2.7% | 4%+ |
| B2B / SaaS | 2.5% | 4%+ |
| Healthcare | 3.3% | 5%+ |
| Real estate | 3.7% | 5%+ |
| Branded keywords | 8-15% | 12%+ |
If you're below average for your industry, your copy or keyword targeting needs work. If you're above the "good" target, focus on conversion rate instead — you're already winning the click.
How Fullrun writes and tests ads
Fullrun generates ad copy based on your product, your competitors, and your target audience. It creates headline and description assets across every category — keyword match, value prop, social proof, CTA — then monitors which combinations drive the highest conversion rates, not just clicks. Underperformers get retired. Winning themes get new variations. Your ads get better every week without you writing a word.
Frequently asked questions
- How many headlines should I write for a responsive search ad?
- Write all 15. But quality matters more than quantity. At least 5 of your headlines should work as standalone headlines — meaning they make sense and are compelling even if Google only shows that one headline with no others. The rest can be supporting headlines that pair well with your core 5.
- How long should I run an ad test before picking a winner?
- At least 2 weeks and at least 1,000 impressions per variation. Ideally, wait for 50+ clicks on each variation. A 2% CTR difference on 30 clicks is noise. The same difference on 500 clicks is a real signal. If you're spending less than $50/day, tests take 3 to 4 weeks to reach significance.
- What is a good click-through rate for Google Ads?
- For branded keywords, 8-15% is normal. For non-branded search, the median across industries is about 3.5%. Legal and insurance sit around 2-3% because of intense competition. Home services and local businesses average 4-5%. If you're below 2% on non-branded search, your copy or targeting has a problem.
- Should I pin headlines in responsive search ads?
- Yes, selectively. Pin your brand name to position 1 so it always shows. Pin your strongest value prop to position 2. Leave position 3 and all descriptions unpinned so Google can test freely. This gives you brand control without killing Google's optimization. The old advice of 'never pin' is outdated — strategic pinning outperforms no pinning in most accounts we've seen.
- Does ad strength score matter?
- Less than Google wants you to think. An 'Average' ad with a strong value prop will beat an 'Excellent' ad with generic copy every time. Ad strength measures asset diversity, not performance. Use it as a checklist — do I have enough headlines? Are they varied? — but never sacrifice a high-performing headline just to bump the score.
- How does Fullrun test ad copy?
- Fullrun generates ad variations based on your product and competitors, then monitors which headline-description pairings drive the highest conversion rates — not just clicks. It retires underperformers, creates new variations of winning themes, and runs this cycle continuously. You get better ads every week without writing a single headline.
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